#1
once again the rythem and rymes are a bit ify but i just want to know what you think about it

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I cant wait to see you again
I consider you my best friend
Ill even play you in the dark
Run naked with your threw the park!


Silver strings, shiny things
Pretty songs, not that long
Twisty knobs, thingamabobs
Tinny screws, just me and you


Power cords, licks, and riffs
Found a new way to pick up chicks
Youve helped me so much these last couple days
I just want to waste this summer away

Silver strings, shiny things
Pretty songs, not that long
Twisty knobs, thingamabobs
Tinny screws, just me and you

And I just cant help thinking about you everyday
I never thought that I would feel this way
When will I get to see you again
I just want to play your strings and make them bend

Silver strings, shiny things
Pretty songs, not that long
Twisty knobs, thingamabobs
Tinny screws, just me and you
#2
if you meant to be serious then i think it needs a lot of reworking, but as a humorous ode to the axe i think it works out pretty damn good.