#1
hey guys can y'all let me know what you think about this riff i've been workin on, it's really simple but i think it's fresh as hell. it's played really clean, and on standard tuning.

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let me know what y'all think and ways i can make it better, or wat i can add. i wanna use it for a song for my band. suggestions would be
#5
Yeah, this has a nice feel to it. Quite like it, it makes a nice intro methinks. Would it then suddenly turn all heavy, like in Battery by Metallica? I think it should. But then come back to this riff for the singing in the verse, that wouuld be sweet. Then for the chorus, it turns heavy again. Perhaps it doesn't need to even turn heavy, having a nice bit of distortion on a second guitar playing some chords over the top of this would be sweet. Also, you could tweak the riff a little. This is what feels more natural to me.


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That sounds pretty sweet to me. Good work, man!

(I have just realised I like saying things are "sweet" lol)