#1
The tree's where no leaves stand

no.
Plastic bags flap upon the branches

Scribblings of a mad man
or a sane man
sanity being relative
to who you
stand next to

Live in the nice dream
life so calm so serene
live without care
choking on plastic ****

Hairbreadth from the edge
collapsing from sanity
into the clouds
a happy blindness

You're deaf, blind and dumb,
twitching in a plastic bag.

Live in the nice dream
life so calm so serene
live without care
choking on plastic ****

Carbon based copy machines
controlled output
doped recreation
it's the plan of a lifetime


wake up
wake up
wake up from the sleep


The pain it'll make you vomit.

God has left his children.



Italicised lyrics are sung very softly.
Last edited by Draken at Jun 12, 2006,
#2
listening to some radiohead lately, i see.

i loveeed all of this, except for:

"You're deaf, blind and dumb,
twitching in a plastic bag."

the whole thing was pretty/ugly.

also, i could have done without the repetition of:

"Live in the nice dream
life so calm so serene
live without care
choking on plastic ****"

maybe if it was only once or twice. for some reason the third time killed me.

overall, great job.
#3
Quote by system
listening to some radiohead lately, i see.

i loveeed all of this, except for:

"You're deaf, blind and dumb,
twitching in a plastic bag."

the whole thing was pretty/ugly.

also, i could have done without the repetition of:

"Live in the nice dream
life so calm so serene
live without care
choking on plastic ****"

maybe if it was only once or twice. for some reason the third time killed me.

What he said. The repitition was a tad annoying to me, but overall, it was an interesting thing to read. Good job.
#4
I think i'll take out the 3rd
"Live in the nice dream
life so calm so serene
live without care
choking on plastic ****"

in fact i'll edit my first post.