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so i am pretty new to this forum. i used to come in here and critique songs, but haven't been around for a while. this is actually my first song that i have written, so i am hoping to get an honest oppinion from some people on it.

the story behind this song is that i met the perfect girl. we hit it off great, and i completely fell for her. the only problem is that she was only visiting for a few days, and she moved back to denmark (i live in canada). so i wrote this song.


One More Day

i'll never know why
the sky's a different blue
it must be how i feel
feeling nothing without you
does it have to be over?
can i just get one more day?
it can never last forever
so many words to say

but now your gone
and i wish that you could see
all the pain i keep inside
knowing it could never be
as you left
another angel lost her wings
still thinkin about tomorrow
what another day might bring

you can lie beside me
we'll stay here for a while
i would give the world
just to see you smile
there are so many things
that i want to believe
about life and love
and what you mean to me

but now your gone
and i wish that you could see
all the pain i keep inside
knowing it could never be
as you left
another angel lost her wings
still thinkin about tomorrow
what another day might bring

another day
another moment here with you
i want to stay like this forever
i just don't know what to do
without you there
my heart will always cry
i can run like i don't care
but it won't believe my lies

cuz now your gone
but i wish that you could see
all the pain i keep inside
knowing it could never be
as you left
another angel lost her wings
still thinkin about tomorrow
what another day might bring

but now your gone
but i wish that you could see
all the pain i keep inside
knowing it could never be
as you left
another angel lost her wings
still thinkin about tomorrow
what another day might bring
Dirty Sanchez