#1
It might be kind of hard to understand how these lyrics work. They're written to music and I don't really have a recording of our band playing it. This song is called A Mass Distortion.

(verse)
No time
No time for any thought
No waiting
No waiting for any answer
Distortion
Distorting the whole truth

(prechorus)
I can't hear your lies
Anymore
I can't sympathize
Anymore
I can't be in disguise
Anymore
Anymore!

(chorus)
Now that we've felt the loss
Will we be sure of what's to come?
Now that the feeling's gone
Can we sleep or will we run?
Through these unclear eyes
I see a mass distortion

(verse)
No victims
No victims of impurities
No struggles
No struggles for power
Distortion
Distorting the whole truth

(prechorus)
I can't hear your lies
Anymore
I can't sympathize
Anymore
I can't be in disguise
Anymore
Anymore!

(chorus)
Now that we've felt the loss
Will we be sure of what's to come?
Now that the feeling's gone
Can we sleep or will we run?
Through these unclear eyes
I see a mass distortion

(breakdown)
A mass distortion!
(this part here, in a normal voice)
I can't hear your lies
Anymore
I can't sympathize
Anymore
I can't be in disguise
Anymore
Anymore!

(chorus)
Now that we've felt the loss
Will we be sure of what's to come?
Now that the feeling's gone
Can we sleep or will we run?
Through these unclear eyes
I see a mass distortion
#3
I enjoyed this piece as a hole, there where only a few problems I could see. The ryhiming seems forced, like you just through in something to ryhme just for the hell of it (example: lies, sympathize, disguise.) I enjoyed the chorus or hook, whatever its called. All in all, a very nice piece and i could see it fitting beautifully to music.
The Devil may.