#1
This is inspired by the Inheritence trilogy (the books currently written in the trilogy are Eragon and Eldest, both best sellers.) They books are written by Christopher Paolini, and are amongst my favorite books.

[Verse 1]
Dragons ride across the skies
Looking the angels right in the eyes
That was the days of the past
None have been seen in centuries
For now the world is aghast
But now the rumors from the alleys
They say a new dragon has hatched

[Chorus]
Soon will be the time to do whats right
We will grab our swords and go to fight
And overthrow his reign of terror
So that once again we can sleep well at night

[Verse 2]
The evil kings stirs in his fortress
But he will not himself fight yet
Instead he sent his favorite pet
A battle was fought
And the day was won
By the rebels led by the one
Now the evil king is under a lot of stress

[Chorus]
Soon will be the time to do whats right
We will grab our swords and go to fight
And overthrow his reign of terror
So that once again we can sleep well at night

[Verse 3]
Oh the stories they will tell
Of the day the land was won from hell
Though the war is not yet over
We are all becoming sober
Waiting for the day to come
When we will earn our freedom

[Chorus]
Soon will be the time to do whats right
We will grab our swords and go to fight
And overthrow his reign of terror
So that once again we can sleep well at night

[Verse 4]
Have you heard the news my friend
People think war will soon be at an end
The Army of Darkness is not recovering well
Soon they'll be on the defensive for days
I think that means the time is near
When the evil king will come out to fight
That will surely be the rebellion day

[Chorus]
Soon will be the time to do whats right
We will grab our swords and go to fight
And overthrow his reign of terror
So that once again we can sleep well at night

[Verse 3]
Oh the stories they will tell
Of the day the land was won from hell
Though the war is not yet over
We are all becoming sober
Waiting for the day to come
When we will earn our freedom

[Chorus]
Prepare your swords
And string your bows
The day of reckoning soon comes
This will probally end very gruesomely
Not many will survive the monstrousity
Still we must fight to prevail

Soon will be the time to do whats right
We will grab our swords and go to fight
And overthrow his reign of terror
So that once again we can sleep well at night

Soon will be the time to do whats right
We will grab our swords and go to fight
And overthrow his reign of terror
So that once again we can sleep well at night
I LOVE YOU JESUS CHRIIIIST
JESUS CHRIST I LOVE YOU
YES I DOOOO
#3
Dude i love Epic lyrics like these, there should be more of them on UG....9/10
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#4
None have been seen in centuries
All i can say as constructive crit is that that line above didnt seem to fit =/

Apart from that, this is a great peice of work and a great idea for a song. I love the chorus...i can imagine a crowd singing that one if you know what i mean. Im sorry my crit isnt all that constructive but i think tis a grat song.
9/10
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#5
Not too many complaints here.

Now the evil king is under a lot of stress
After all the epic lyrics, I felt this was really out of place, and the use of the owrd "stress" seemed to modern, if you get what I mean. "Stress" seemed out of place in what I imagined as a song set in older times

I didn't particularly like the chorus, I just felt it was a bit uninspired, the rhyming seemed a bit forced.

My main problem is with verse 3, in which you go to an AABBCCDD rhyme pattern, for some reason. I just didn't think it was up to the quality of the rest of the piece. It was like you handed responsibity of the verse to another person entirely. I just didn't think much of it.

On the plus side, it is some very good writing and it flows quite nicely. In fact it's better than that, I 'll just leave you with the score.
9/10. Top Stuff.