Never heard the original but this is nice! Guitar a little quiet, but damn it's atmospheric. Sounds like Mogwai or something. The slightly distorted rhythm isn't as good when it first comes in, but you pick it up soon. I think it could have been mixed a little better, the drums are overall too loud.

You are a truly talented guy if you can play all the instruments here. I enjoyed it a lot.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=375996
thanks alot. i remixed the whole thing, the drums are much quieter and i redid the vocals at the loud part. thanks for the compliments.
sweet, it was right through the computer, i was hoping it would sound like it wasnt. thanks alot for the encouragement.