its alright but your trying to copy james' style a little to much were it just became cheesy, stop with the so many 'err-ah' stuff and just sing.
Eh, needs some work. Especially at the chorus, work on your timing. The words weren't clear some of the times, but I'm guessing that's because of the recording stuff. Not bad though.
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Ok, the vocals are, well, decent I guess. However, you should have at least used a lyric sheet, you don't really know the words do you?

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