#1
Hey what's up. I posted this song for the RHCP Cover contest, but I wanted some critique as to what is wrong with it. I will crit for crit, please just tell me what you think of it.

I know it's slightly different from the original

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#2
love it, love the other covers to, but i think it could use vocals. One last breath would be awesome with some
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#4
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love it, love the other covers to, but i think it could use vocals. One last breath would be awesome with some

lol yeah that song is just out of my range though