#1
Hey UG.

Here's an update of a song which got one crit of "crap". It's not finished but I need some help to stop it sounding so bad. It's no way near a good PTB, so any comments welcome.
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#3
well i've said some things before. from what i can tell you just don't know much of any theory. i'd really recommend learning that before composing. i made some changes to the second line to give you an idea for what you can do. you had a lot of 8th notes so i changed the rhythm. there were also a lot of weird notes which i changed also. i'll give you links to two of my songs. it'd be great if you critiqued them.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=351546
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=366773
Attachments:
New Song 2 Revised.zip