#1
This song goes back and forth from a heavy/fast type, to a slow, more ballad-ish verse at some points. my joke is that its kinda bipolar. Let me know what you think.

Point of View
We can?t go much faster
We know all the answers
There isn?t much else we can do
We?ve been so inspired
And yet we?re so tired
Of letting them not know what?s true
It?s all of these liars
They?re fuel to the fire
And it seems that they don?t have a clue

But now that we?re thinking
This ship isn?t sinking
And maybe it?s our turn to fall
And now that it?s over
And ev?ryone?s sober
We?ve finally given our all
It?s sad if you blame those
Who don?t know what they know
?cause maybe it isn?t their fault

We?ve gone undefeated
They?ve said that we cheated
But really we just cannot lose
We?ve done it a new way
And don?t care what they say
We?ve done what we wanted to do
It?s all those above us
We thought that we could trust
But then they would not let us move

Now that we?re all one
And things now have begun
To turn out perfectly fine
Life has more meaning
Instead of us screaming
We all have our own piece of mind
And those that we once fought
For things that we?ve now got
Are simply one of our kind

We can?t go much faster
We know all the answers
There isn?t much else we can do
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Fender Standard Strat w/Tex-mex pups
Epi Les Paul Jr.
Epi MM-20 mandolin
Yamaha FG-110
Boss SD-1
Boss BD-2
Dunlop Crybaby Wah
Digitech RP80
Fender FM212R
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#2
THATS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!The words really work well together (the rhyming is great). It seems like it could have a sort of punk sound to it, and i mean that in a good way. Great job dude.
#3
^ thanks. i wrote this with my second guitarist, and it seems we always have a good song at the end of the session. and i took the "punk" comment in a good way, dont worry.
My Gear:
Fender Standard Strat w/Tex-mex pups
Epi Les Paul Jr.
Epi MM-20 mandolin
Yamaha FG-110
Boss SD-1
Boss BD-2
Dunlop Crybaby Wah
Digitech RP80
Fender FM212R
Epi Valve Junior

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