Heres a really short acoustic piece I wrote a while ago, and recorded yesterday. Constructive criticism is welcome.

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Well, personally, I don't like it. I think the chord progression is nice, but the strumming is too... I don't know how to put it... Wrong. You are just playing the chords by strumming down, strum down and up in a correct rhythm and it will sound a lot better.

Also, a good idea is to give it words, cause thats where music really shines.

Keep it up, though!

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=376177 Crit mine please, thanks dude!
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i don't like this one as well as your other two, but it's not bad, it just needs more work. i'm not sure if it is just my speakers or if the recording quality is really bad but i can't hear it too well. it's really quiet and then when i turn it up it kinda buzzes and gets distorted. wish i could hear it better so i could give you some actually useful criticism/praise but that's all i got! sorry!