#1
Fire in your palms
Light burns your eyes
Twisting like snakes
Mistakes you make create fake ways to integrate
Your inner mate to turn right while facing left
Who?s left
Exempt from sin
Within a clan you call kin
But what?s more than this
Your fists close
As you crush your last rose
He rose for you
Yet you show no composure
Compose this remorse
With regrets and frets
Like you care to share the hate of tempting fate
Yet another mistake
Fight with glass in your knuckles
Pain is winning
So why not lose
A bloody sweat drips
To rip sick twisted
Madness from the hips out
Balance of life disrupt
Erupt corrupt insane
Regain once known
In Christ a light has shown
Led Zeppelin rocks the hardest!!!
Last edited by Jack_Moch at Jun 16, 2006,
#2
Mistakes you take create fake ways to integrate
Your inner mate to turn right while facing left


I'm sorry but please work harder before posting.
#3
the song wasn't great, but it's better than I could do.
"With regrets and frets
Like you care to share the hate of tempting fate"

that's cool, probably the best part of the song. Keep it up!
B.C. RICH
#4
well does this one sound so horribly emo as my other did
Led Zeppelin rocks the hardest!!!
#7
my bad broseph...i didnt wanna piss off the man ill make sure its gone
Led Zeppelin rocks the hardest!!!
#11
i deleted the other one cus i liked this better
Led Zeppelin rocks the hardest!!!
#13
so is this one any good or was the other just that bad
Led Zeppelin rocks the hardest!!!
#17
yeah i coud understand the lines need to rhyme more comment but its not really supposed to like "flow" its supposed to be poetic and dont trash on me cus i know poetry should flow but it doesnt always have to
Led Zeppelin rocks the hardest!!!