hey some nice playing man.. i think the intro carried on a little to long, i enjoyed hearing you play alot more than the effects
Really good and unique. I like this a lot actually. I am sure you have been told it is reminiscient of NIN. Only thing I will say is it sounds a lot like it is about to explode into something loud and strong but never does. Left me feeling a need for resolution. Perhaps this was by design. Would make a great intro or interlude.

Crit for me? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=376336
you are an awesome guitarist. I am not to into metal or the shredding thing but it sounds relaly good.