#1
Ok, this song Is called "Twilight serenade". I wrote it a while ago and decided to post it. This is only a demo take, my voice isn't that great, there are a lot of rough edges to smooth, and I understand that the recording quality is very poor, but my mic is broken and I havn't been able to do anything for a while. so here's the link. tell me what u think http://www.myspace.com/awesterndust
Last edited by Ironpeace at Jun 14, 2006,
#2
Despite what you think about your voice, I actually liked the vocals, the chord progressions were pretty good, and I really liked the chorus, it was really catchy . Overall I thought song was really original, keep up the good work.
#4
Yea man, youre a little to hard on yourself about that. Youre voice sounds great, for the mood/tone you were trying to give. I really dont find it to be as "original" persay, despite the lyrics, cause it has that very popular feel to it. But it was going places. Hit me with a crit if you can.

overall keep up the good work, you dropped my panties.

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#5
thnx man, I apreciate the crit. Your "concept in progress" is really sweet. I love the guitar work. Great job, keep it up man.