#1
hey this is a new song me and my friend recorded recently to finish off our cd.
we took the chord progression for Karma Police by radiohead and i just threw a little solo over it. i was trying to give each verse a different feel and style so tell me what u think

ps- listen to the other songs and tell me what u think!

www.myspace.com/larryandjackson

Peace!

thanks in advance
Originally posted by skeptopotamus
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#2
hey man i listened to the first one, its nice and funky! haha i like it, too bad you dont have any vox to go over it im sure some kind similar to an anthony keidis type vocal style would fit in nicely there....and for some reason the karma jam wouldnt load for me, i dont know whats up with that....but yeah ill keep trying and if i get it ill edit this one and let you know what i think!

in the meantime, mind critting me?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=376174

thank ya much!
#3
Trying to critique it, but some setting on my browser absolutely loathes the myspace music player. Some firewall views myspace as a sight that can give out secrets and I can't get the music player, (but access the site?). Otherwise I totally would. If you put it in a different format I'll crit it then. Or if its too much trouble, don't worry about it. Thanks for critiquing mine (https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=5868910#post5868910).


Looking forward to listening, I like Karma Police & Radiohead altogether.

EDIT:
Listened to the purevolume site. Sounds pretty good. I like the more funk feel to it all, its not a stereotypical style. I like it.
Last edited by excalibur672 at Jun 15, 2006,
#4
The Karma jam as said wasnt loading for me, but the Harry Pena, which is a neat name has that RHCP funk sound to it. Perhaps it was the recording, but the tone sounds somewhat weak for such a song that has strong accents on the downbeats, imo. Bass breaks and progression is hot, So's that keyboard.

crit me as well. http://www.purevolume.com/gabemendoza

thanks.
#5
hmm thats weird that its not working
myspace sucks but ill try and get it workin today

thanks for the crits!
Originally posted by skeptopotamus
Well, me and my lab of expert scienticians have created an ingenius device that will capture one's flatulence and transport it to a nearby foe's rectum, thus attributing any foul odors towards your enemies, mblavin.