#1
Lick You Of The Mud

beautiful as a flower gleaming seperate from the bud
wonder how that smell tastes if or would
I were to lick you of the mud
camoflauged even in bright early morning
birds still sing awful moods, they keep bringing
path we've chosen just, keeps on swinging

(chorus)
evaluate the cause and recieve an effect of the cause
because I can't hold back
not the way it was or never be what it was
because you don't know jack

beautiful as a flower gleaming seperate from the bud
wonder how that smell tastes if or would
I were to lick you of the mud
lost 'round here have I been going
wasps still sting poor young dolly, voodoo prick showing
dark feels pitch black within sunny, with rythem slowing

(chorus)

sadness, I dont wanna touch, no touch
words, I dont wanna feel, no feel
colors, I dont wanna smell, no smell
taste is why I fell, I fell

beautiful as a flower gleaming seperate from the bud
wonder how that smell tastes if or would
I were to lick you of the mud

(chorus)

lick you of the mud
lick you of the mud
lick you of the mud
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#4
no really, i like it a lot. The problem I think my 7 year old brother could probably re-write it and make it better
#5
it would be much appreciated, can you put it up on here when he finishes it?
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#7
well then he cant write it better, you raised my hopes for nothing
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#8
Shouldn't it be "Lick you off the mud" ?

Or "Rid you of the mud"
I was there, I tossed the bag on the porch and let out my insane warcry of justice. It was pretty awesome.