#1
I've been dreaming of
you now for a while
but it seems that I just
cant think of your smile
right now yeah right now

When I woke up this morning
and got out of bed
It was hard to believe
what you said
o what you said to me

chorus: All of your words they're
crammed up together
they're in one ear and out the other
I just cant take it anymore

I hope that someday
we can give it all up
just forget and forgive
it'll feel so good
yeah like it should

chorus
Last edited by joeacoustic114 at Jun 16, 2006,
#3
not bad, but the lines but "it seems that I just
cant think of your smile
right now yeah right now"
aren't very good. maybe u could think of something else to write there?
B.C. RICH