This is a song me and my band started to write. We haven't finished yet. tell us what you think.

Why didn't I lock my bedroom door
To block out all the screaming and to ignore
The violence it makes me wanna go insane
You've tortured me for way too long
I'll never be the same

And today I'll make it on my own
I don't need you anymore
And today I'll never be the same
Cuz you took it all away
Please read the rules. I changed the title for you.

The song is really chopped up, in the sense of rhyming and rhythm.