#1
Hey
i just was really into these chords i was messing around with, and put them into a song

Um Yea, please crit, think i should have done better, and there is an ending solo

thanks

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#3
yes i was finger picking, im still working on it

thanks though
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Orange Dual Terror
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#4
Some of the chords sound quite good. I hear some sloppyness in the playing. As far as the songwriting goes, this gets quite boring. That solo came out of nowhere. You might wanna think some better ideas there. Good attempt! Keep playing.

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