#1
alright new song, Ill crit for crit
I know it's bad, any help would be very nice

Battle

Overide the machine
Take what's left
That smirk makes you seem
so lost.

and when you call that name
he wont come running
it's a cold night
the green make's you stunning

The Tree's are watching
they cry for me
They see what you are doing
Concentration is the key

He lost his glasses
he wouldn't see
Why dont you give him a fast one
Im sure he'll tickle with glee

You are the valkyrie
And I am your army
send me into battle
Just to die.

The Tree's are watching
they cry for me
They see what you are doing
Concentration is the key

I'm not in conflict but you are
I know im close
but i'm sure it's too far.
#2
this is pretty good in a way.. i mean i can somehow relate to this. haha..
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fcuk yeah..

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