RustyGold
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2005
279 IQ
#3
Are pulling my my eye lids? That's so repetitive and un-musical...!
Interesting use of rubato, but you're clearly no Chopin...
And you ****ed up around 1:45 and numerous other places...

I liked it, and by liked it...I mean i didn't smash my computer to pieces while bemoaning the death of my soul, and falling into a spiral of bludgeoning depression .
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Last edited by RustyGold at Jun 17, 2006,
sheumack111
UG Board King
Join date: Jan 2006
591 IQ
#5
Sorry buddy, no one can be Joe Satriani, i like your ideas, it needs more though..... You are only playing one note for each hand i think??? You need to use ornamentations to spice it up, and at times the timing seems to dissapear. Use a metronome and work out other notes for each hand (eg play the octaves or 5ths or 4ths) also when leading into a section try and use a 7th (leading note) this will help you blend back into the main theme.
sheumack111
UG Board King
Join date: Jan 2006
591 IQ
#6
Ps your version of Midnight isnt the best.........

You miss tones of chords and there is no timing, you need to use a metronome!!!!!!!!!!!
Erc
UG's ultimate asshole
Join date: Jun 2005
670 IQ
#7
I don't think so.

It gets boring, very boring. The recurring theme is weak and the whole thing is lacking in solid ideas.
sheumack111
UG Board King
Join date: Jan 2006
591 IQ
#8
Just listening to all your songs..... GET A METRONOME BEFORE I KILL YOU AND EAT YOUR CHILDREN!!!!!
yawn
Be back later.
Join date: Sep 2005
2,701 IQ
#9
^ Dude, eating other people's children is not nice.
sheumack111
UG Board King
Join date: Jan 2006
591 IQ
#10
dude listen to the timing and you will want to each his children aswell
Shorrock
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2005
489 IQ
#12
its bad, and the fact that you said you were "the next satriani" makes it sound even worse as i was expecting somthing pretty amaizng.

Also your cover of midnight is awful