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Okay I put a piece on here called heathen street and later on after writing it i had some better ideas for it, and so thought i would re submit it, hopefully as an improvement. (cirt for crit)

Heathen Street

Take a walk down Heathen Street
You never know who you might meet
The only thing that can be for sure
Is that you can?t come back
And have a second chance
At screwing up the eternal cure?

The morning after the night before
You never know, you can?t be too sure
Was it a dream or was it real?
You?ll never know if you can leave
Or whether you can begin to believe
That it is the only way to heal?

Heathens start believing,
False idols keep believers believing
The rest are about to feel the heat
Down Heathen Street

You never could hate as you planned
I could never believe you as you planned

You found your faith before it found you
You found your faith now you?ll stick it to
All the heathens who don?t follow the teachings
Convert the masses it?s your choosing
You can?t afford to risk loosing
The power you get through your preaching?

You never could hate as you planned
You never could hate as you planned
I could never believe you as you planned
I could never believe you as you planned

Heathens start believing,
False idols keep believers believing
The rest are about to feel the heat
Down Heathen Street
Down Heathen Street etc.