#1
sports her life
she doesnt have time for anything else, right now
and shes obsessed with her weight,
diets, pills and waters all that makes her up,
and shes got grey eyes as shes staring back at me,
and i cant see who she really is,
but i know there has to be someone behind her eyes,
becuase i hear her cry every single night.

and i cant let it go
and i'd be obsessed with my weight
if i didnt look anything like her, my angel
because shes so...perfect in every single way i've found
but she walks around with her halo hanging down, down, down.

whats wrong i ask to her
but she doesnt even hear me speak
and then i cant see her anymore
so i went walking aroung to find her
but i cant find her anywhere
it seems to me shes hidden between these walls.

and i'd do anything to see her again
because if i looked like her i'd be so happy,
so why can i still hear this angel crying tonight,
why is it shes hiding between these walls
because her halos hanging down around her neck, its so low, low low.

her eyes turn blue
shes full of colour
so why isn't she looking up..
to see a smile...
to find...
to be happy?

sports her life
shes obsessed with her weight
shes got grey eyes
and there's got to be someone there
because i hear her cry every single night, all alone.
she's drowning, she's drowning, she's drowning, in her own sorrow,
she falls down
and this silence
is the sound of halos hitting the ground...

yeah i wrote this with only a bass so yeah comments please..
halos falling hangs on the sound of death
#2
pretty cool, i had a good tempo/ beat to it.. nice i like it actullay..


good job =)


10/10
#3
cheers
i think i will play it on an upright bass it will give it more feeling if i bow it...
halos falling hangs on the sound of death
#5
i did...well my band is on there, but i play guitar in that and i dont know if it still up but yeah go have a look if it is still up it will be "The Choudees" or something i think
but we are going rockabilly yeah...so ill be playing bass (upright)
halos falling hangs on the sound of death
#6
nice song. it's really well written and some of the lines are great, such as "she's drowning, she's drowning, she's drowning, in her own sorrow,
she falls down
and this silence
is the sound of halos hitting the ground..."
very powerful stuff there. 10 out of 10.
B.C. RICH