#1
Hi all,

Thanks for looking at my thread, and further thanks if you have a listen to my recording and give as helpful criticism as you can. Once done, add a link to a recording you've done and I'll gladly return the gesture.

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You can listen to both, but primarily the song called 'Golden Green Eyes'.

Thanks again.
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#3
Music's pretty cool, reminds me of the Goo Goo Dolls.


You have a good voice, but you're not hitting the correct notes, and are basically flat/sharp most of the time. Keep it up, though!
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#4
Well, really good!!! I like the voice it's very good!!! And I there wa another song from you which is called poor bet.....I was thinking wow!! The beginning is good and the voice....I got no words
#5
I like the acoustic strumming there. I agree what's said about the vox. You've got a great voice, allthough you need to develop your singing and ear. Well, the song wasn't too long, but I would've wanted to hear some change in the dynamics. Good job!! Keep it up!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=373100
#6
Thanks guys for the critique. Glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing it =)

I only really started singing properly since the beginning of '06, so I still have a long way to go. Friends told me that it comes with practice, so I'm gonna be doing just that. I will be re-recording these songs cause they're rough demos, so if you're ever interested you can pop back and have a listen. I'd appreciate it!

Thanks
"I didn't know there were ninjas in Japan, did you?"

"Ninjas aren't dangerous. They're more afraid of you than you are of them."

Beating Hearts Baby