#1
Well, I haven't tryed to write anything in about a year.. so i tryed again. Here;s what i wrote, please feel free to comment...

Well, I haven't tried to write anything in about a year.. so i tried again. Here?s what i wrote, please feel free to comment...

I am who I am and you cant change that
I do what I do, so don't try to stop me

Don't try to force you're beliefs
Up upon my head
I'll listen to you and then
Believe what i think is right

I listen to you, now you can listen to me
Let me make my own decisions, I have a mind

Don't try to force you're beliefs
Up upon my head
I'll listen to you and then
Believe what i think is right


Force you're beliefs upon me, just do it now!
You will pay in the end, and see how!

Told you not to force you're beliefs
Up upon my head
I listened to you but you
didn't listen to me

And now you've paid the price
Guitars:
Slivertone SIK-1 (Black w/ Custom Killswitch)
Epiphone Les Paul Custom (Alpine White)

Platanos con Salami

Hippies at Heart
#2
really good! my only suggestion is to make the verses a little longer. besides that, awesome. just plain awesome.
B.C. RICH