That is pretty good, except the quality is terrible and the vocals need work, especially on the falsettos.

But you can really feel the emotion of the guitars.
Not too bad, the notes are there, although the voice has too much "British" injected into it, and, like said before, the falsetto is a little weak. Not that I'm blaming you, I've done this cover before and it's got a difficult vocal part.

The main problem I felt though, was that the tempo is all over the place. You absolutely MUST practice with a metronome, first individually, then all together with a metronome. It's the only way anybody ever gets tempos correct (well, asides from playing along with CDs and other, better people). A good metronome with subdivision capability will set you back about $20 at a music store.

Keep working on it, it's coming along.
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