#2
That is pretty good, except the quality is terrible and the vocals need work, especially on the falsettos.

But you can really feel the emotion of the guitars.
#3
Not too bad, the notes are there, although the voice has too much "British" injected into it, and, like said before, the falsetto is a little weak. Not that I'm blaming you, I've done this cover before and it's got a difficult vocal part.

The main problem I felt though, was that the tempo is all over the place. You absolutely MUST practice with a metronome, first individually, then all together with a metronome. It's the only way anybody ever gets tempos correct (well, asides from playing along with CDs and other, better people). A good metronome with subdivision capability will set you back about $20 at a music store.

Keep working on it, it's coming along.
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