#1
Kill me ,Kill me , Kill me oh my mind
Stop beating Stop Beating oh my heart,
Drain my mind of this blood,
My despair more than my thoughts,
I've cried enough don't want to live at all,
Thought i was happy,
Illusions in front of my eyes,
Is now what i have realized,
I've hated my thoughts,
I've hated my tears,
I've hated myself till i go blind,
Kill me ,Kill me , Kill me oh my mind
#2
i like it but you should lenghten it a little bit and get a little bit more structure like maybe chorus and verse thing