#1
Here's one of the very first songs I ever wrote and recorded. Basically, I'm curious for feedback - I want to re-record this song, but I'm not really sure what things I should change to make it better.

http://horriblemusic.dmusic.com

It's called The Average Joe

Crit for crit.
#2
Hey no offense, but I think u should really work on it... the parts which include singing are really boring, plus you lose the rythmn a couple ofd times, I suggest recording the guitar and your voice on separates shots... then you could mix it with atomix or any other program... also some more melody on your singin would be cool, the guitar parts are very good.
#6
^ Acutally, I did tune it.

I think my guitar tuner's broken

It was brand new when I recorded this too!