#1
i posted this song in the recent RHCP contest and figured i would see if i could get anymore opinions on it. i know the vocals arent very good so any help on any aspect (recording, effects, actual singing, etc) of that would be appreciated. im also curious as to what people think of the tone of the guitar and the recording quality, as those are two things im constantly striving to improve. any other comments, critiques, praise, etc is also welcome.

now for the song: its the first one listed at my dmusic

obviously if you crit mine ill crit yours. thanks for the help anyone.
#2
Its pretty good man, lyrics could use more signing rather than talking, good work for covering a rchp song
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