#1
please crit.

I am in a tangled web of thorns; a maze with no exit
My heart is punctured by my own mistakes
Lost, in an interlacing network of thoughts

If fate is pre-determined, am i destined to this place?
Perhaps i have dreams, ambitions, desires
Restricted and fenced by someone elses case

Hold me close and tell me you're mine tonight
I will write a new outcome for you and I
Whisper the words and the rivers will groan
A dove, on an olive branch, in the light.
aint no angel gonna great me?
Last edited by guitarzak at Jun 19, 2006,
#2
Sounds pretty good... for what type of music is it written (what genre)??
#3
none at the moment. Will write music at some point. Thanks for the reply
aint no angel gonna great me?