#1
This is a song i wrote while i was packing the dishwasher... (?) yeah, well i come up with a nice riff to go over the top & it's one of my favourite songs now... it doesnt have a whole lot of meaning or depth, & i know that, so dont say that later plz. anyway, crit 4 crit....

Well I left school, broken heart but open minded.
And not exactly sure what to do with my life.
Still not sure.
Still not sure.
And so I left what I loved & packed my bags up.
Not exactly sure, which way to go.
Still ot sure.
I dont think I'll ever be quite sure.

Chorus
Well I thought that I'd never be free.
Still not sure if I'll ever be.
And I thought that'd never be me.
But I'll wait until (wait until) things get easier to see.

Well kicking stones into the water didn't do much.
I'm not exactly sure how the ripple was going to help.
Still not sure.
Still not sure.
And I thought busking in the street might get me somewhere.
Not exactly sure how when nobody's there to hear.
Still not sure.
Still not sure.

Interlude part thingy

And I'm screaming, "yeah, yeah, you got it right!!"
Yeah, yeah.

Chorus x2

Hope you like it!! Any tips are greatly appreciated...
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Quote by Nelsean
Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.
#4
thanx^^!!
Quote by Lord_Of_Dance.

I never understood why a girl would take a boner as a bad thing "Oh no, your attracted to me, you sick wanker." :\ x


Quote by Nelsean
Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.
#5
i like the way it is written, reminds me a lot of modest mouse, just the style, not really the content.
#6
I was actually hoping this would be about dishwashing. I do dishwashing for money (hard to get $7.50 and hour doing anything else at age 17), and just worked Friday, Saturday, Sunday, and Monday. Since I had just gotten home and was tired, I wanted to hear someone bitch about dishwashing.

You disapointed me. 2/10.
They say the old woman's got the wisdom
'Cause she couldn't read the clock anymore
She said "The numbers don't represent the moments"
Says she don't see what all the ticking's for
#7
I was actually hoping this would be about dishwashing. I do dishwashing for money (hard to get $7.50 and hour doing anything else at age 17), and just worked Friday, Saturday, Sunday, and Monday. Since I had just gotten home and was tired, I wanted to hear someone bitch about dishwashing.

You disapointed me. 2/10.

thats a really sad comment man...
Quote by Lord_Of_Dance.

I never understood why a girl would take a boner as a bad thing "Oh no, your attracted to me, you sick wanker." :\ x


Quote by Nelsean
Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.
#9
Quote by Nickelbitch
thats a really sad comment man...

Does it make you sad because you don't make money yet?
They say the old woman's got the wisdom
'Cause she couldn't read the clock anymore
She said "The numbers don't represent the moments"
Says she don't see what all the ticking's for
#10
Quote by Greenfinger182
Does it make you sad because you don't make money yet?


no actaully, i make 20 bux a week thank u... i just think its sad that you put such an irrelevent comment on there & labelled it a 2/10 just because it wasnt exactly wat you wanted to read... happy with that???
Quote by Lord_Of_Dance.

I never understood why a girl would take a boner as a bad thing "Oh no, your attracted to me, you sick wanker." :\ x


Quote by Nelsean
Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.
#11
Quote by Nickelbitch
no actaully, i make 20 bux a week thank u... i just think its sad that you put such an irrelevent comment on there & labelled it a 2/10 just because it wasnt exactly wat you wanted to read... happy with that???

I'd argue, but your username already states what I was going to say.

And 20 dollars a week? I'm sorry, Mr. Gates, I didn't mean to doubt you.
They say the old woman's got the wisdom
'Cause she couldn't read the clock anymore
She said "The numbers don't represent the moments"
Says she don't see what all the ticking's for
#12
Quote by Greenfinger182
I'd argue, but your username already states what I was going to say.

And 20 dollars a week? I'm sorry, Mr. Gates, I didn't mean to doubt you.


Jesus Christ... you honestly just dont want to give up do you??? Screw you mate do you really have to post this **** under something I've written??? 20 bux a week is pretty good for a 14 yr old who only needs the money for guitar lessons, & doesnt need anything else at the moment (except people like you off the net...) got it now???

Oh yeah... & haha your little joke was so funny...
Quote by Lord_Of_Dance.

I never understood why a girl would take a boner as a bad thing "Oh no, your attracted to me, you sick wanker." :\ x


Quote by Nelsean
Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.
#13
Quote by Nickelbitch
20 bux a week is pretty good for a 14 yr old who only needs the money for guitar lessons, & doesnt need anything else at the moment

Your profile said you were 15.
They say the old woman's got the wisdom
'Cause she couldn't read the clock anymore
She said "The numbers don't represent the moments"
Says she don't see what all the ticking's for
#14
I like it. It's originaly written, which is quite rare today. You get it all down, but just maybe some rhyming in the verses wouldn't have hurt?

8,5/10!
When I heard smoking would kill me, I bought shares in Dunhill and Marlboro - Thomas Geraghty

If we don't change it, nothing will fucking change.
#15
Quote by Greenfinger182
Your profile said you were 15.


Only just... and why the frick should you be looking at my profile for??
Quote by Lord_Of_Dance.

I never understood why a girl would take a boner as a bad thing "Oh no, your attracted to me, you sick wanker." :\ x


Quote by Nelsean
Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.
#16
Quote by Nickelbitch
Only just... and why the frick should you be looking at my profile for??

Because I wanted some e-sex.
They say the old woman's got the wisdom
'Cause she couldn't read the clock anymore
She said "The numbers don't represent the moments"
Says she don't see what all the ticking's for