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ok so yeah umm this is like my first go at writing lyrics like ever so any critiscism and advice is greatly apreaciated - thanx


you make me feel so dirty
so guilt-ridden and angry
your cruel voice it beckons
me right back to the same

Pre Chorus
why do you do this to me?
why is all i ask
because this pain is bleeding
My Heart A-Way

Chorus
and at the end
at the end of this tunnel
i will stay
stay waiting for you
and when into dispair you fall
falling down, down and out
you will learn to hate
hate as much as i do

you make me sound so crazy
so ****ed up and filthy
now you leave me again
and i cannot give chase

Pre Chorus
why do you do this to me?
why is all i ask
because this pain is bleeding
My Heart A-Way

Chorus
and at the end
at the end of this tunnel
i will stay
stay waiting for you
and when into dispair you fall
falling down, down and out
you will learn to hate
hate as much as i do

Slow Breakdown/Solo

When your time, it has come
bleed you will, and feel my sorrow

Pre Chorus
why do you do this to me?
why is all i ask
because this pain is bleeding
My Heart A-Way

Chorus
and at the end
at the end of this tunnel
i will stay
stay waiting for you
and when into dispair you fall
falling down, down and out
you will learn to hate
hate as much as i do

as much as i do
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oh great man god, pray tell: how do I become as cold and emotionless as you?!