#1
Hi, I am new to these boards. I thought this could be a good place to get advice about music. This is my first post ever on these forums so stick with me if this is meesed up. This is one of my riffs I wrote and I want to ues it for a song. So check it out. Any comments/advice would be awsome. Thanks-


Tuning: Half Step Down Eb Ab Db Gb Bb Eb

-INTRO-
Eb}------0----------0---------0----------0---------0-----------0----------0----------0-------
Bb}----0---0-----0---0-----0---0-----0---0-----0---0-----0----0-----0---0-----0----0---- 2X
Gb}--9-------9-8-------8-6-------6-4-------4-2-------2-1--------1-2-------2-4--------4--


-VERSE-
Eb}------0----------0----------0---------0-------------
Bb}----0---0-----0---0-----0---0-----0---0----------
Gb}--9-------9-8-------8-6-------6-2-------2--------
Db}------------------------------------------------------
Ab}------------------------------------------------------
Eb}-------------------------------------------------------

-CHORUS-
Eb}----0--------------0---------------0---------------0-----------
Bb}----0--------------0---------------0---------------0-----------
Gb}----1--------------8---------------6---------------2-----------
Db}----2--------------9---------------7---------------2-----------
Ab}----2--------------9---------------7---------------0-----------
Eb}----0--------------0---------------0---------------0-----------


...Something like that... -Any Comments/Advice
#2
Its sounds too much like Mama I'm Coming Home by Ozzy Osbourne.

The first parts anyway

But I like the chord progression you have there. You could work around that and get something
Last edited by Alex S. at Jun 20, 2006,
#3
watch out someone's gonna steal it, cuz yknow with that new article, "Musical Theft: The Art Of Stealing Gracefully" its a good thing to steal music nowadays... what bs.
#4
too bad that is almost exactly Mama I'm Coming Home by Ozzy.
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