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Crit this song for me

Wake me up by suckerpunch


Verse 1
Grumbling at the alarm as my day begins
A problem pops up and I?m late again
Goin thru the same junk every day
Sometimes I wonder should life be this way
Problems stackin up like a pile of bricks
I gotta test commin up on the 5th
So many problems times are hard
How I handle some make me feel like a retard

Chorus
Whyle I?m asleep Lord before the day begins
Please wake me up from this dream I?m in
don?t make me go thru the same junk again
Lord wake me up from this dream I?m in

Verse 2
I?m saved I go to church every day
I?ve found those that was lost and shown them the way
God I know I havent really done my best
I have to ask you r u with me in this mess
I?ve been through trials through and through
When I have problems I look to you

Chorus2 (Workin on it)

Verse3
Always on Friday life gives me a break
away from the chaos and confusion it makes
Hangin with my true friend down at CBC
There is the prettyest girl I?ve ever seen
I wonder if she?ll ever notice me
But the next day lifes aginst me again
Lord wake me up from this dream I?m in

Chorus3
My fealing inside I cant hold ?em in
Lord wake me up from this dream I?m in
Things arnt the same but its still the same game
And I?ll be in it from beginnin to end
Lord wake me up from this dream I?m in