#1
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|----1-------0-------1-------0-------|
|--3-------3-------3-------3---------|
|3-------3-------3-------3-----------|

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|------2-------3-------2-------3-3-2-|
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it's played at a slow tempo. critiques thanx
#4
Quote by punkture_wound
good for u dickhead


ur an idiot.. u cant be mad when u post a riff and people say they dont like it. Becuase honestly its not very good.
#5
hey your riff was ok but you could make it a little better by doing somthin like this...(i dunno how to do code so bear with me...) note, all the E and A string chords are palm muted. play fast...
D---------5-6----------6-5---------5-6-----------5h6p5-I
A-3-3-3-------3-3-3-------3-3-3--------3-3-3-----------I
E-3-3-3-------3-3-3-------3-3-3--------3-3-3-----------I
pm...... ........ ........ .........

D---------7-8-----------8-7----------7-8-----------7h8p7-I
A-5-5-5--------5-5-5--------5-5-5--------5-5-5----------I
E-5-5-5--------5-5-5--------5-5-5--------5-5-5----------I
pm....... ......... ......... ........

it sounds like a pretty sweet metal riff that way. i dunno if you lik metal but the other one... it was ok but sounds like it should be played fast. i know the change changes the whole feel of the intor but i think its pretty cool. like i said ive only been playing for less than a yar so i hope you like it.
#8
is this supposed to be in standard tuning?? in drop d it sounds much more interesting until the modulation...
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soo much n00bage
Quote by xX Maverick Xx
sorry to bust everyones bubble but lamb of god arent "hardcore" theyre death metal, and therefore metal.