#1
I just finished this song and would like some feedback. I'm not too sure about the solo, I'm not sure if it really flows or whatever but let me know what you guys think.
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#3
Sounds good. Nice solo. The only part I didnt like was the first measure of the chorus,
the 1st guitar didnt sound that great with the 2nd. But overall good stuff.

Can you please crit mine? Its in the sig.
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#4
thats pretty sweet i like the whole feel of the song. some sweet basslines. really good sounin solo. nice job! can you plase crit mine its sweet harmonis intro thanx
#5
Thanks so much for the positive feedback guys, I really appreciate it. Man I wasn't too sure about the solo but you guys seem like you like it. I wrote the solo in like 20 min. Anymore feedback?

EDIT: Sorry Chris, My GP software won't let me load your song, and no I haven't played it with a band, I don't have a band unfortunatly
Last edited by Avalanche1 at Jun 21, 2006,
#6
hmm.. good!
i liked the verse riff and the solo very much the chorus is not as good imo. overall good! keep it up!

EDIT: make sure to crit my first song https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=380977
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#7
Thanks, I guess the solo isn't as bad as I thought, haha. Thanks again for all the positive feedback guys.
#8
Nice work man, and I agree, it does sound very strokes-y. So kudos to you if that's a good thing! haha crit mine if you can, I think it's on the second page **lazy**.
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#9
Hmm, I've never listened to The Strokes so I wouldn't know if it sounds like them, haha.
#10
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EDIT: Sorry Chris, My GP software won't let me load your song


Dang, well i can put up a midi file, i also have a GP5 file now if thatll work?
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#11
I like it sounds like Blink 182 mainly the bass I agree it has a stroke's sound as well. I think people will enjoy this if you played it live.

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#12
I'd love to here that as an actual song. I thought it sounded like The Strokes aswell this is the best thing i've heard for a while
#14
Wow thanks guys. I'm surprised you guys like it so much, usually people here don't like my songs that much. Thanks a lot for all the positive feedback.