Okay, first time I've posted... Um... Here's one of my songs. I don't care if you're nice or not, just as long as you critt.

Tell me is there something behind
My alcohol soaked brain
And my bud-numbed mind?

Is there someting behind
How the politicians heart shine
In spite of all the homocide?

Is this the world that we're doomed to live in?
I get the sick feeling that this is all there is to be given.

Please prove me wrong
I wanna see the paradise
Beyond all the vice

And do something besides
Stumble and fumble in the darkness
Of my own mind

I don't wanna mingle
with the evil thoughts
wanna leave them behind

And that's all she wrote kiddies.