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And i wonder, why the world turns the way it does.
And why its not safe to walk out your front door for the news, you'll be in it tommrrow anyways.
And i, tryed to call your phone, just to see that no one is home.
Just another night alone, i guess ill get used to it

And i, can see right thro yours lies, and yo wish, if anyone was still alive.
Would you have to break down and cry? or would the world be, all the same?

And i, tryed to make you smile, but you ignored me all the while.
And i watched him take it away, like a nightmear thats, here to stay.
And i, burn up inside, just for another drink of my pride.
As i watch you fall and cry.

And i, can see right thro yours lies, and yo wish, if anyone was still alive.
Would you have to break down and cry? or would the world be, all the same?

And i cant let the last words you hear, be "im sorry and theres no need to fear" cause i can solve it all, with just one more beer
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here is a song i wrote earlyer tonight, its about complications with girls, friends, enemys, my new house, and a crap load of other stuff, anyways, plz comment it really means alot to me
#2
i liked this piece, particularly your last line.

And i cant let the last words you hear, be "im sorry and theres no need to fear" cause i can solve it all, with just one more beer

love that man, very strong closing line, really leaves the reader with a strong feeling.
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#6
i liked it individually. the verses went together well. the chorus seemed almost contradicting to the feeling of the verses. maybe its just the way im reading it. really liked the last line, though id leave out the 'one more beer' part, i feel that i brings it down. but thats just my opinion. keep writing.