#2
Your strum pattern ruined everything that makes the song... (I'm talking about the verses, what happened to the almost-frantic strumming?)

Your voice also doesn't have enough emotion in the song. I think it makes you go a little flat at times too. And you didn't hit the 'high notes'(you could if you wanted, but you didn't)

Some slight timing issues with the guitar in the choruses...
#3
This song has a kinda difficult strumming pattern anyway, work on it a little bit, the weirdest part is how his pattern doesnt follow his voice really.
#5
It's a difficult song to sing and play (correctly) at the same time. I don't know if you double tracked it or not but it might be a good idea. I believe the pattern is 1 + 2e+a e+a e+a for the Am E C and just 1+ 2e+a 3+ 4e+a for the F G if that helps at all (PM me if you need a better explanation). Vocals off at times but otherwise okay. Like retribution said they need more emotion. It's always nice to see people post brand new covers so keep it up.
#6
It wasn't half bad, you just need to practice a bit more on it

Alltho, your Soco amaretto lime cover... dude, if you're gonna follow the tab then at least tune your E string down to D, cause you obviously followed a tab whichin you're suppose to do that, because it's all off.

Have fun.
I only have one guitar, sue me..