#1
I've got a song in my head
It's about good things and bad
The bad thing's I'm bored
Good thing this is very short
Still it is very sad
Where did all the inspiration went I once had?
I'm going to drown myself in my swimming pool.
#3
Emo? I thought those were lovesongs?
Anyway, does it matters if it's emo or country? What do you think of it?
#4
Isn't all music emo? I would think only bad music doesn't convey some type of emotion...
#5
^ Exactly. Music is a (or an? ) way of expression.
Of course people love some styles more then others, but it's a bit strange to dislike anything because it's 'emo'. (Which wasn't even my intention. I just write whatever comes in mind).
#6
Well...about the piece...it's ok...except for the last sentence...it just doesn't fit the rest of the poem
On the sixth day God created mankind, I say it is a waste of time.
My project: _simple_city
#7
Thanks for your comment, LGM. You're right about the last line. I wrote the lyric in about three minutes, and I was too lazy to make up a decent closure.
Maybe:

Now I'm lost, trampled and alone
With just salesmen over the telephone
I feel the coldness in my bones
This life is so terribly monotone
And I'm gonna drown myself in my swimming pool

I guess that's emo -).
#8
Well...it adds up better...now you have a reason to drown yourself.
On the sixth day God created mankind, I say it is a waste of time.
My project: _simple_city