#1
Suggestions and constructive criticism is much appreciated. Thanks.
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Riff.zip
Last edited by xgrindcorex at Jun 21, 2006,
#2
the beginning sounded alright, try using something else at the end.....the arpeggios In my opinion you should save for the solo, giveing it more flare, the third....nah....something isnt right......but I kinda got the idea where you want this to go....keep it up man!
Clip, Clop, Clip, Clop, Clip, Clop.....BANG! BANG! BANG!.....clip, clop, clip, clop, clip, clop...

^ Amish Drive-By
#3
You're going to play that on a classical guitar? Kidding of course. Anyways, that wasn't that bad. The arpeggios don't really fit, nor do the PHs at the end imo.
#4
Well, firstly if it's going to me metal, don't play on a classical guitar. Nah I'm only joking. But I changed the guitar to Distortion Guitar and it sounded fine. Not really much else to say, the riff works, and with a bit of screaming and a f*ck load of distortion that's a great metal intro riff.


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#5
Thanks for the comments guys, they will definetly help me tweak it a little bit. I should make a metal song done entirely on a classical guitar, that would be wicked.