Suggestions and constructive criticism is much appreciated. Thanks.
Last edited by xgrindcorex at Jun 21, 2006,
the beginning sounded alright, try using something else at the end.....the arpeggios In my opinion you should save for the solo, giveing it more flare, the third....nah....something isnt right......but I kinda got the idea where you want this to go....keep it up man!
Clip, Clop, Clip, Clop, Clip, Clop.....BANG! BANG! BANG!.....clip, clop, clip, clop, clip, clop...

^ Amish Drive-By
You're going to play that on a classical guitar? Kidding of course. Anyways, that wasn't that bad. The arpeggios don't really fit, nor do the PHs at the end imo.
Well, firstly if it's going to me metal, don't play on a classical guitar. Nah I'm only joking. But I changed the guitar to Distortion Guitar and it sounded fine. Not really much else to say, the riff works, and with a bit of screaming and a f*ck load of distortion that's a great metal intro riff.

Crit mine?
Thanks for the comments guys, they will definetly help me tweak it a little bit. I should make a metal song done entirely on a classical guitar, that would be wicked.