#1
comments always necessary, and crit for crit

some people live
and some people die
some people stay low
and some people fly high

it's not the home where they are raised
it's not staying sober or getting blazed
it's willing to see the nature of things
it's willing to ascend and find your wings

some people laugh
and some people mope
some people cry
and some people hope

it's not going out and making that dollar
it's not living your life with that collar
it's willing to make every life better
it's willing to shine, in rainy weather

they are the ones who set the example
the ones who refuse to stomp and trample
over the people they know to be strong
because they know it can't be too long
before happiness becomes contagious
and all the word will be courageous
not caring about death or dying
forgetting about tears and crying
embracing the fact that we're alive
and knowing that we have to strive
to help each other, reach out a hand
to when we fall down, make a stand
it's not hard, it's a state of mind
that they'll continue to pray we will find
#2
Seems really good to me with the rhymes but you dont always have ot rhym everyone line in a song cuz then it might sound too obvious or boring but still good
#3
Good job. 10/10. I really liked it.
"Imagine all the people, sharing all the world"
-John Lennon
#4
I liked it alot. I don't really have anything to say, except adding a syllable to the second line here would make it flow better.

it's not going out and making that dollar
it's not living your life with that collar