this is just rough material and i just want to hear what you folks think of it

Thou name shall be hallowed and thy face kept unknown
Thy shall bear thy cross in the blackness all alone
But I do not warrant my own or thy strength
Coz strength is not measured by an arm?s length

Light can light up the deepest fear
Burning to end this tragic sphere
Burning holes in this world most derange
And force it to change
without music ,life would be a mistake- nietzsche

i'm not distorted, i'm just fuzzy