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Let me know what you think of this...crit for crit like I always do.

Looking around I see what I've become
And to tell you the truth I am afraid
Something about this life has got to change
I must clean up this mess that I have made

I've tried so hard
To not let it come to this
I can hide my scars
But that doesn't cleanse the skin

This life is a fake; will I ever know the truth
Or will I have to deal with this on my own?
I can't erase this pain, so I finally turn to you
You are the only one who can take me home

I feel the sickness start to overwhelm
There's nothing that can save me from it now
Trapped forever in my own private hell
Forced to live with this shattered life I've found

I've tried so hard
To not let it come to this
I can hide my scars
But that doesn't cleanse the skin

This life is a fake; will I ever know the truth
Or will I have to deal with this on my own?
I can't erase this pain, so I finally turn to you
You are the only one who can take me home
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