#2
sorry, but i think it's a little bit way to obvious what you're gonna do.
i was listening to it and was humming your next note already and then you were playing it, and that was just the first time i heard it.

p.s. try to have only that rythm guitar on. and that solo thingy off.
put some headphones on your ear and play with your own guitar.
just keep on trying and improvising.
eventually you'll find some reaaaaaaly cool stuff and then you are really original!

GOOD LUCK!!

Cheers