#1
It's time to rock
It's time to rock
It's time to rock but you don't know

Cause you keep on
Cause you keep on
You keep on listening the hiphop song

Just get it on
Just get it on
Switch off the light, get this party on

Bop together
Hop together
Bop together
Just don't step on somebody's foot


All the girls looks hot
When they dance to this rock song
Guys get crazy
They don't care they got no money..
#2
Its pretty hard to Crit a song like this, the only thing I thought of it though is you say "You keep on listening to the hiphop songs".. but who is your audience going to be? If this is a rock song, probably not many of them listen to hip hop. Just my thought, but no one would think twice about it if you kept it in.
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