#1
watch me die
watch me die

my eyes will
decieve me as
I lay here
bleeding from my
cuts I
seem to tear

let me out of here
the dark makes me scared
Let me take off my mask
Just in time time to watch me die

here with you
I smile inside
you wait for me...why?

let me out of here
the dark makes me scared
Let me take off my mask
Just in time time to watch me die

watch me die

I wrote this song
for you and your thoughts of
suicide
I can't but feel a need
to die for you
just wait for me
for me

let me out of here
the dark makes me scared
Let me take off my mask
Just in time time to watch me die

watch me die
watch me die
watch me die
watch me die


I also have this on Guitar Pro 5
HERE
Peppermint Schnapps makes me sloppy...
#2
hmmm... cliche. REALLY sorry. and i guess you've been listening to BFMV lyrics?... if you have then that's a bad start theyre pisspoor, and if you haven't then you'd like their lyrics. sorry i can't see anything different to a thousand other bands here.
#3
sorry man, not my type of music, im not into all that hardcore want to kill urself stuff, so ill say nothin lol except this
#4
watch me die
watch me die

my eyes will
decieve me as
I lay here
bleeding from my
cuts I
seem to tear

Hmmmmmmm very emo and very cliche

let me out of here
the dark makes me scared
Let me take off my mask
Just in time time to watch me die

I don't think the rhythm works, but the lyrics are a bit better.

here with you
I smile inside
you wait for me...why?

Actually I quite like this bit, its interesting.

let me out of here
the dark makes me scared
Let me take off my mask
Just in time time to watch me die

watch me die

I wrote this song
for you and your thoughts of
suicide
I can't but feel a need
to die for you
just wait for me
for me

I don't like this. Its really cliche I feel like I've heard it all before.
let me out of here
the dark makes me scared
Let me take off my mask
Just in time time to watch me die

watch me die
watch me die
watch me die
watch me die


I also have this on Guitar Pro 5
HERE

Its Ok I give it 7/10. Could you crit mine please? Here is the link https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=381719
#5
if any of you guys think it's about killing ones self....then you don't know how to read lyrics...I don't know who BFMV is so....idk....and the music makes up for the words. I understand that the words are cliche, that's why I wrote them that way. Gives the listener something to think other than what the music tell them to think...read between the lines...*not a rant*
Peppermint Schnapps makes me sloppy...
#6
Well, if its not about killing one's self, then its about...

1. A girl who loves you
2. Jesus
3. Some other combination of "Girl", "Love", and "Jesus"

By the way, you decided on Phobia right when Breaking Benjamin is announcing the release of their album Phobia? Just coincidental.
#7
Quote by Zuka
Well, if its not about killing one's self, then its about...

1. A girl who loves you
2. Jesus
3. Some other combination of "Girl", "Love", and "Jesus"

By the way, you decided on Phobia right when Breaking Benjamin is announcing the release of their album Phobia? Just coincidental.


yeah, a bit TOO coincidental...
B.C. RICH
#8
actually I decided of Phobia because of what the song means...hiding, overbearing, blahblahblah...it's actually about my mopm soo......and honestly...I didn't even know breaking benjamin was still together...
Peppermint Schnapps makes me sloppy...