Well first of all, um... why did you record two guitars? lol

They go out of time with each other a lot.

The beginning was alright, though it definitely sounds like you're out of tune. But... you're using a pick. Don't use a pick on this song; it's impossible.

I've played this entire piece before and still know most of it, and I can safely say (while not trying to be rude) that I have no idea what you're trying to play at around the 1:35 mark.

Um, there are plenty of mistakes as well... this could either be because you're using a pick, you don't fully know the piece, haven't practiced enough, etc.

I think you'll find this piece 10000 times easier once you start fingerpicking instead of using a pick.
My God, it's full of stars!