I just started playing a few months ago and im not a singer but i just want honest opinions and crit from people.
Its just the three verses no chorus but oh well here it goes...


ill crit back

The vocal melody was completely off, and the vocals themselves sounded like you just didn't care and weren't putting any effort into it. I don't think the song needs a capo. It was also missing that cool Hawaiian style intro riff. Try using this tab, I think it'll sound a little better.

Could you crit mine? Thanks.