#1
I just started playing a few months ago and im not a singer but i just want honest opinions and crit from people.
Its just the three verses no chorus but oh well here it goes...

http://mikeym.dmusic.com/

ill crit back

thanks!
#2
The vocal melody was completely off, and the vocals themselves sounded like you just didn't care and weren't putting any effort into it. I don't think the song needs a capo. It was also missing that cool Hawaiian style intro riff. Try using this tab, I think it'll sound a little better.

Could you crit mine? Thanks.